ANM 324 Project 5
Creating a CD cover/back brings together all the design and technical skills
weÕve studied this semester. These are small works of marketing art that, if
successful, demand attention and help sell the artist they represent.
HereÕs my general
grading criteria for this project:
95-100- CD cover, spine and back is complete and artwork is
challenging. Type has resonance
and is very readable. The CD has excellent shelf appeal and demonstrates your
clear command of the Illustrator toolset.
Production info/upc included. The CD cover is
a work of art!
90-95-CD is very well done but there are some minor flaws in
concept or execution. Type styling may not resonate with the content or theme
of the product or you may have created a less than spectacular composition of
image and text. Omitted production info/upc.
85-89-CD is good but may not completely communicate the
essence of the artist in either type resonance or design elements. Production notes missing.
80-85-Label has obvious technical and design issues that
will prevent it from having good shelf appeal. Type doesnÕt fit or image is too complex to be clearly
understood by shoppers.
70-80-CD cover is not effective is communicating the essence
of the product and major requirements are missing. There are significant technical flaws.
70-below very late work
Note: Late work will be downgraded by 10 pts
Anita Kunz Group
Pam Redlew
-Quite timely that
you picked Donna Sumer for your artistÉI was certainly surprised to hear that
she died this week. Since she was the ÒQueen of DicoÓ
itÕs very appropriate that you have a disco ball linking the front and back as
well as the array of lights. The
picture of the artist is very low resolutionÉwish you could have found
something in higher quality..the
pixilated colors just donÕt look very good. I donÕt know any other way to say
it. I can also see a transparent
object in the lower center of the coverÉlooks odd. The type you chose for the
title doesnÕt resonate disco to meÉ.whereÕs the
energy. Tracks on back are very readable but youÕre missing the production
notes, which were required.
Liubov Voronina
-I
like to see variety in the CD artists and your Vivaldi cover does it!
The gondola adds a very romantic look on
the front. YouÕve added continuity with a duplicate gondola on the back. My
main concern is the variety of type styles and the lack of a strong layout for
the type. It looks very arbitrarily placedÉthe placement of type should help
you lead your viewer from front to back and through the composition. On the
cover I would scale the Antonio Vivaldi up quite large to establish visual
hierarchy. On the backÉI would omit the gondola and perhaps enlarge the portrait and
fit the remaining type adjacent to it.
DonÕt be afraid to use the white (empty) space as an important part of
your composition. UPC and production notes are excellent!
Jamie Ly
- I really like the cover image on your CD. The crop adds energy thatÕs
consistent with the title Whirlwind. I assume you put the highlights in her
hair? ThatÕs really well done and the word Whirlwind swirling compliments the
theme. I almost wish you had not depended on a stock image of her singing as
your whole background on the back. How could you communicate the Whirlwind
theme into the back with color or just text? Perhaps the swirling patterns in her hair could be used
(without her image) just to link the front to back with tracks also
swirling? Just a
thought. Front is strong
but back distracts. Upc..did
you make it? ItÕs cool!
Rosenwald Group
Vicky Chen
- I havenÕt heard
of LaRoux but I like the CD cover youÕve
designed. The posterization
technique adds style and would make the cover standout. YouÕve also established
good continuity between front and back
with similar style that transitions
from spine to back. I especially
like the font youÕve chosen. ItÕs very edgy and contemporary and works well
with his name. Type is also very readable on the back where tracks have
excellent contrast. There are a couple of improvements IÕd suggest: the
alignment of the track numbers is rather odd. Try left alignment to at least
get the 01, 02 etc to alignÉit just looks a bit too irregular to be designed
this way purposefully. You also omitted the required upc and production notes.
Michelle Naas
-Your CD cover looks great!
YouÕve established the mood of the Twilight Saga with the split images
and dark sinister background. Font looks great and further communicates the theme. I especially like the addition of the
cross highlights which add style to the font. The track names are very
readableÉglad you didnÕt highlight those too. Production notes and barcode look
great. My only comment would be that the text on the spine is just a touch too
large with descenders p and gÕs going below the
baselineÉminor but important in the print production process. Excellent work!
Steven Tuck
- I wasnÕt sure
if you were going to go with the Òhand-drawnÓ look that you showed in the rough
design. ItÕs actually ÒgrowingÓ on
me and as an overall composition it looks very good. The cover is playful and consistent from front to back. The thin font style definitely fits the
hand-drawn linear style and itÕs very readable. I would suggest using more consistent spacing between track
names or even putting a tiny icon in there to separate titles. Good production notes and upc.
One of the most creative
solutions in the class..keep
up the good work!
Deborah Maqrques
-
I typically get holiday themes for this project in Fall
so it was a unexpected to see your JazzÕn Santa
CD
cover. Hey, who doesnÕt like the santa
season? The large belt is a clever way to transition from front to back and the
little elvesÉwell, theyÕre cute but IÕm wondering why you didnÕt mix it up a
bit and have some changing direction or at least going over the top of the
buckle. IÕm just asking.
Your choice of font, especially for JazzÕn, has excellent resonance and rhythm that fits a jazz album. Tracks are very readable and upc and production notes fit the requirement. Nice work..HO HO HO!
Kroencke Group
Mary Urtz-I really like the simplicity of your cover. One of the most difficult design skills is to effectively incorporate white spaceÉthe urge to fill a cover like this is very strong. Thanks for resisting. I especially like the before/after visual thatÕs created with the spilled milk and the obvious link with the title. So the artwork is very well done. The track listing is very readable but, as you can see with my presentation, the list is too tight to the left edge. This can happen when you work with a white document on a larger white window..you just donÕt realize how it will look when completed. Missing the upc and production notesÉ.oh dear! Very creative!
Scott Lockhart-The road disappearing in the distance is a
strong visual metaphor for Journey and their greatest hits. The cover is strong
and has continuity
with the spine and back with the road map. The Rest Area might be better as Curves Ahead as we move to
the back. The idea of using the track names as waypoints is very clever. I
think would even stronger if the path was a dashed yellow line, which further
strengthens the intellectual link with the front. Folds could be enhanced with
some shadowsÉmaybe IÕm asking too much.
Upd and production note meet
requirements! Like the them a lot!!
Melissa McGregor-Your cover certainly is dramatic and demands attention. The gun, cityscape and blood spots all read danger and mystery! This seems very appropriate for the Your Favorite Weapon title. The cover is very compelling and the red transparent band leads the viewer to the track. The semi-transparent box helps readability of the track names. My only suggestion would be to tone-down the production note area with transparent gray. As is, it just looks quite harsh and inconsistent with the overall composition. Excellent work!
Frazier Group
Andrew Jozwiak-Storms are very engaging design elements so the addition of your ÒhurricaneÓ on the cover would be attractive. It certainly fits the switchfoot CD title. The font style for Hello Hurricane is rather playful. Is that the message you want to communicate? IÕm just asking. The artists look pretty happy on the back so maybe theyÕre getting a good storm gig? The transition from front to back is not as strong as it could beÉhow could you show the concept of hello hurricane on the back? Maybe you could add storm clouds or at a minimum get some of that dark ominous color into the back. This was one of the challenges I wanted everyone to consider with this project. Tracks, production notes and upc all look very good!
Ken Rathbun-Your
cover is very conservative, which probably fits Mumford and Sons.
The color palette, type style and layout all work but donÕt exactly scream,
ÒBuy MeÓ off the CD rack. OK..I can live with that because a likely buyer would be
familiar with the group. Tracks are very readable and I like the way youÕve
alternated the name colorsÉthatÕs a great technique. UPC looks good but production notes are missing. I know, IÕm being picky.
Your work is very precise!